The Roots of Twenty-Four
I am rich with the history of my forefathers
their blood is my blood
their pain, sorrow, joy
mine
I am the compounded noise of a raging past
water thick and heavy
with sweat from their toil
I live in the bosom of yesterday
tucked within a mind that says never
but a body that says why not
I come here to seek truth
and in truth find freedom
But, when I breathe, it's with the breath of a thousand years
found in the heartbeat of just twenty-four
their blood is my blood
their pain, sorrow, joy
mine
I am the compounded noise of a raging past
water thick and heavy
with sweat from their toil
I live in the bosom of yesterday
tucked within a mind that says never
but a body that says why not
I come here to seek truth
and in truth find freedom
But, when I breathe, it's with the breath of a thousand years
found in the heartbeat of just twenty-four
2 Comments:
Love the picture and poem...beautiful...
"I live in the bosom of yesterday/tucked within a mind that says never/but a body that says why not"
That's my favorite part. From a literary standpoint, I love it, because it plays off the 24 yr. vs. 1000 yr. dichotomy; not only is there that seemingly timeless identity struggle, there's another identity struggle rooted in the present--the mind vs. body struggle.
But, aside from the literary stuff, it's just a fine piece of expression. And, I agree with Jen; the combo of the photo & poem is really great. You know, being able to marry visual art and written art isn't a common gift. Maybe you should combine all of your gifts and talents into a poetry/photography book whose proceeds go to help children who struggle with illness. Or something. ;)
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